Friday, 12 June 2020

My crayon has quit



W.A.L.T Write a persuasive letter.
JOEL,



Blue crayon here. You are killing me, literally.

I know you like the ocean but you are making me
short and stubby.  You don't even KEEP INSIDE THE LINES.
I'm over this.
Your stubby friend,
Blue Crayon




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1 comment:

  1. Miss Pownall16 June 2020 at 10:01

    Great work Joel, I like how you talked about your passion of the ocean. Well done!

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