Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 5 June 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Namaste Joel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Miraj I'm in Tuffery class at Hay Park School. I really enjoyed your blog post about the Peregrine falcon, but I do have one suggestion, that suggestion is that you didn't add a video. I think that your blog posts will benefit off of using a video. Either way though this was a phenomenal blog post.
-Miraj Tuffery class
thank u for the comment i will on next blog that i can
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