The little Shoemaker
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 7 May 2020
the little shoemaker
The little Shoemaker
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Hi Joel, the description certainly matches the title. That would be interesting having shoes as friends how do you think he would feel having to sell them? Did he make shoes, sell them or fix them? Good job on remembering the WALT.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Joel, why did you choose The Little Shoemaker to write about?
ReplyDeleteNext time I would love some more description about his personality. You have included some excellent details about what he wears and looks like. Ka pai.