Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 12 May 2020
TaiTaylor is born
Middle: they had a baby called Tai
Problem: Teoma family didnt like her being with captin Taylor
Solution: Getting everyone together for a meal
End: The family met baby Tai and forgot about everthing
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Joel, this looks like a good summary of a story. It's interesting how sharing food can make such a difference to people. Next time can you check for capital letters and remember your WALT I hope you are enjoying your last weekend on the farm before school starts again.
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