Thursday, 30 April 2020

Hagrid

Hagrid

Hagrid is the gamekeeper at Hogwarts.  Hagrid is big and tall and always
wears a long brown coat.  He has a ruff voice.  He has long shaggy hair and beard.  He is very friendly and makes sure his friends are happy.  He is very lovableHe likes to keep magical creatures for example he had
a pet dragon for a while. 
He keeps an eye on Harry Potter like a guardian.

2 comments:

  1. Good work Joel, is Hagrid your favourite character?
    You have described Hagrid very well. He sure does have shaggy hair!
    Next time I would really like you to proof read your work and make sure that all full stops and spelling are correct. An excellent effort Joel.

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  2. HI Joel, I love your description of Hagrid, I can picture him clearly in my mind. I love the Harry Potter books, and reading this makes me want to read them again. Have you read all the books?

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