Tuesday, 1 September 2020

dog in class persuasive letter

Joel                                                                   Miss P

Room 2                                                                                               Room 2

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Dear Miss P,

I think Charlie(Miss P´s dog) should come into the classroom.Firstly he will lower your stress levels, secondly he will make your day better if you aren't feeling good, finally they will keep you active.\

Firstly,he will lower your stress levels .Pating dogs can lower people's stress levels by a lot.Dogs send out a stress reducing hormone called Oxycontin. Studies have shown lowering your stress levels by a dog can also benefit physical health.

Secondly, he will make your day better if you aren't feeling good.You have just had an argument with your mum and brother you are late to school. Yes I have had a few of these but when you come into class there is a dog that will make your day better.

Finally, they will keep you active.A dog needs walks, the dog will want walks and it will need someone to go with him so the person will keep healthy by walking the dog.

 In conclusion, he will lower stress levels in  people, he will make your day better if you aren't feeling good,  they will keep you active.

Yours sincerely, 

Joel Clyne




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