in room two we have been writing narratives. Here is what we had to include a:good title, the characters, where they are when the story happened, a problem, a solution, a good ending and description.

Surfing with Jaws

Hi my name is Joel strange things have been happening in the surf.
Surfers have been disappearing and me and my friends are trying to   find out what has been happening.


By the way my friends names are: Taj and Jai. Jai is short and has blond hair and he like to surf. Taj medium brown hair and surfs too.

A year ago: Taj, Jai and I built a hut we used: sticks, sand and seaweed we built it in the sanduns. I got the sticks, Jai got the seaweed and Taj built the hut.


We now use it as a look out post to see how the surfers had disappeared and when...

After a few hours we saw something in the water it was massive! It was as long as a rugby field and looker like it weighed 200 tons. We saw a fin, a big, big fin. It was as tall as a basketball hoop, when it snatched one of the surfers with its giant mouth. Its mouth was as big as half a basketball court, it looked like a…


Massive shark. We knew that we had to do something about it. We needed ideas on how to stop it! Why don't we build a wall(brick) and then build a wave machine? So we told the government to do something and they did and then surfers could surf again and the sharks were gone.THE END